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write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college, describe the situation, explain your problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Parichat Srisoottipong, I am currently living in Building B of ABC college, room no. 123. I previously found myself struggle trying to work from my room during the day. These were caused by several tasks that I found uncomfortable arising from sharing facilities and accommodations. I was unable to use internet properly during the day, as far as I know, the wireless signal point was far away from my location. While I was in the meeting with my classmates, the internet signal got lost and I had to walk out to run the meeting in the hallway. Not only internet problem that I found it is difficult for me to work within this room, I also found that living with roommate is not suitable for me. One evening, I had to work at nighttime but my roommate insisted to turn off all the light that I need. I therefore, believe that this sharing room type is not flexible for me. Please could you help arranging more internet wireless router, or I might need a room that has internet available. Also please suggest me any available accommodation that will fixed my trouble. I am looking forward to hear from you. Your Sincerely, Parichat
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
Parichat
Srisoottipong
, I am
currently
living in Building B of ABC college,
room
no. 123. I previously
found
myself struggle trying to work from my
room
during the day. These
were caused
by several tasks that I
found
uncomfortable arising from sharing facilities and accommodations.

I was unable to
use
internet
properly
during the day, as far as I know, the wireless signal point was far away from my location. While I was in the meeting with my classmates, the internet signal
got
lost and I had to walk out to run the meeting in the hallway.

Not
only
internet problem that I
found
it is difficult for me to work within this
room
, I
also
found
that living with roommate is not suitable for me. One evening, I had to work at nighttime
but
my roommate
insisted to turn
off all the light that I need. I
therefore
, believe that this sharing
room
type is not flexible for me.

Please
could you
help
arranging
more internet wireless router, or I might need a
room
that has internet available.
Also
please
suggest me any available accommodation that will
fixed
my trouble.

I am looking forward
to hear
from you.

Your
Sincerely
,

Parichat
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IELTS letter write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college, describe the situation, explain your problem

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  American English
8 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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