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Dear Jessica, Recently I have attended a two days course that you organized and I am writing to give you some feedback on it.

Dear Jessica, Recently I have attended a two days course that you organized and I am writing to give you some feedback on it. rLVe6
Dear Jessica, Recently I have attended a two days course that you organized and I am writing to give you some feedback on it. The course is well structured and easy to understand which introduces the valuable information of managing a project. Explained the details on the relation and impacts of the scope, schedule and resources of a project. And sharing the importance of roles and responsibilities of a project manager. I like the course because it helps me to improve my project management skills which are very useful at my workplace and after attending the course I have gained more confidence when handling challenging projects. Moreover, the course was scheduled on weekends to make it convenient for business workers who are unable to attend the course on weekdays. I just would like to suggest having more class interactions between students and also provide a hard copy of course materials. And due to current covid-19 situations, it will be good to conduct the future classes online. I hope my feedback is useful. Yours Sincerely, Shirley
Dear Jessica,

Recently I have attended a two days
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course
that you
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organized and
I am writing to give you
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feedback on it.

The
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course
is
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well structured
and easy to understand which introduces the valuable information of managing a
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project
.
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Explained
the
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details
on the relation and impacts of the scope, schedule and resources of a
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project
. And sharing the importance of roles and responsibilities of a
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project
manager.

I like the
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course
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because
it
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helps
me to
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improve
my
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project
management
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skills
which are
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very
useful at my workplace and after attending the
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course
I have gained more confidence when handling challenging
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projects
.
Moreover
, the
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course
was scheduled
on weekends to
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make
it convenient for business workers who are unable to attend the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
on weekdays.

I
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just
would like to suggest having more
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class
interactions between students and
also
provide a
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hard
copy of
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course
materials. And due to
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current
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covid-19
situations, it will be
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good
to conduct the future classes online.

I hope my feedback is useful.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Shirley
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IELTS letter Dear Jessica, Recently I have attended a two days course that you organized and I am writing to give you some feedback on it.

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  American English
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174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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