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Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter

Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter 0oR9

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my room-mate. As you know we share one room, I can not study in the room at all any more if I still stay there. She always has friend visiting and has parties in the room. They make lots of noise and switch on the radio very loudly, for me this environment is very difficult to study and I need a quiet room. Even borrows my things without asking, it is very impolite. I request you can give me a new room next term because I have been asked her has parties in other place many times they still have parties in the room. I really can not stay in the same room with her. I would be grateful if you could change me a single room. Your faithfully, Catherine

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my room-mate. As you know we share one

room, I can not study in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 at all Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?anymore
any more
 if I still
 stay there.

She always has friend visiting and has parties in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. They This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 lots of noise and switch

on the radio This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
loudly
, for me this environment is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 difficult to study and I need a quiet

room. Even borrows my things without asking, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 impolite.

I request you can give me a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
next
 term This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I have been asked
 her has parties in

other place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times they still
 have parties in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. I really
 can not stay in the same

room with her.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 me a single room.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
,

Catherine