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Hello, Today I would like to talk about a special hotel I stayed in. In 2019, I and my whole family with family friends went to Sweden on vacation. On that trip, we stayed our last two days in the natural property called Kolarbyn Ecolodge. It was an amazing property. Kolarbyn Ecolodge is a place to stay but not a hotel. It is a place where we can experience true nature. When we first arrived there, we were greeted by beautiful pine, spruce and birch trees and a proper wild forest on the shores of a pristine lake. Everything was green there. There were around 12 huts. Our neighbour called the mud-holes them, somethings like a Hobbit home. There was no electricity, no electricity devices, no kitchen. There they hang the quote entering gate " No electricity, nothing fancy at all, just natural mysteriousness. And that is precisely why you will love this place". If you have any daily work, you have to do it on your own. If you have to cook food, you have to chop some wood, get fire on and cook it. If you want some water, you have to go nearby spring. they have quote everywhere like find an axe and swing it Chop some firewood Get fresh water from the natural spring Start a fire, just like that. And cook dinner. There are some shops on the property. We can get basic groceries, there is no kitchen. We are quite a few members so we have to book more than five huts. When I woke up there, time doesn't matter. I listen to the birds, saw the sunrise from woods/trees. On the property, there was a nice cabin on the bank of the lake, it was beautiful. Kolarbyn Ecolodge has a history of its own. We stayed there for two days. It like we were living in a whole new different world. Living in the woods, we can experience whole new actives.
Hello,
Today
I would like to talk about a special hotel I stayed in.

In 2019, I and my whole family with family friends went to Sweden on vacation.

On that trip, we stayed our last two days in the natural property called
Kolarbyn
Ecolodge
.

It was an amazing property.

Kolarbyn
Ecolodge
is a place to stay
but
not a hotel. It is a place where we can experience true nature.

When we
first
arrived there, we
were greeted
by
beautiful
pine, spruce and birch trees and a proper wild forest on the shores of a pristine lake.

Everything was green there.

There were around 12 huts.

Our
neighbour
called the mud-holes them, somethings like a Hobbit home.

There was no electricity, no electricity devices, no kitchen.

There they hang the quote entering gate
"
No electricity, nothing fancy at all,
just
natural mysteriousness. And
that is
precisely
why you will
love
this place
"
.

If you have any daily work, you
have to
do it on your
own
.

If you
have to
cook food, you
have to
chop
some
wood,
get
fire on and cook it.

If
you want
some
water, you
have to
go nearby spring.

they
have
quote
everywhere like find an axe and swing it

Chop
some
firewood

Get
fresh water from the natural spring

Start
a fire,
just
like that.

And cook dinner.

There are
some
shops on the property. We can
get
basic groceries, there is no kitchen.

We are quite a few members
so
we
have to
book more than five huts.

When I woke up there, time doesn't matter. I listen to the birds,
saw
the sunrise from woods/trees.

On the property, there was a nice cabin on the bank of the lake, it was
beautiful
.

Kolarbyn
Ecolodge
has a history of its
own
.

We stayed there for two days. It like we were living in a whole new
different
world.

Living in the woods, we can experience whole new actives.
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