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You see the above advertisement for course designed to help improve your memory. Write a letter to organizers of the course.

You see the above advertisement for course designed to help improve your memory. Write a letter to organizers of the course. KkM9

Dear Madam. I'm a student at English courses and I recently so an advertisement for your classes on developing memory. I'm unemployed now but I will hopefully get a job soon. I used to learn Korean language about 2 years ago and having returned to starting after this break, I'm finding it quite difficult to memorize important things from my lessons. It's clear, I am having to concentrate very hard to remember even small share of information. I have heard about visualization and association techniques, but I'm not convinced about using these methods effectively. I will be grateful if you could give me detailed information about the techniques that you use in the course, as well as the cost and dates of your courses, so I hope you can offer me flexible hours, and I do not have a great deal of time. I think I could get benefits from your course and look forward to your reply.

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 and look forward to your reply. 