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You are applying for a job in an international company. You would like to ask your previous employer to write a reference letter for you. Write a letter to your previous manager. In your letter remind your manager of the job you previously held in the company tell him / her what position you are applying for and why you want it ask him / her to provide you with a reference letter

You are applying for a job in an international company. You would like to ask your previous employer to write a reference letter for you. Write a letter to your previous manager. In your letter remind your manager of the job you previously held in the company tell him / her what position you are applying for and why you want it ask him / her to provide you with a reference letter aobV
Dear Mr. Sharma, I am writing this letter with regards to a request for providing me a reference letter for applying a new job in a multinational company. I was working with your firm on the position of Senior Engineer of Maintenance Department, from July 2018 to September 2020. Furthermore, the company to which I am applying for the job are seeking candidates from the Mechanical Engineering field, with fine experiences in the quality and maintenance. They have called for the position of Assistant Manager at the maintenance department. Hence, this is the job title I am applying for; moreover, for which I need a reference letter from you. Thus, with this letter I will be able to convince and prove them I am apt for this leadership position. Would you be kind enough to give me a reference letter for job which I am applying for? In that letter please mention about my personal traits, my working capabilities, and also about my team work and leadership qualities. I would be grateful if you can do so. I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Rama Nair
Dear Mr. Sharma,

I am writing this
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letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
a request for providing me a reference
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letter
for
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applying
a new
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job
in a multinational
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company
. I was working with your firm on the position of Senior Engineer of Maintenance Department, from July 2018 to September 2020.

Furthermore
, the
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company
to which I am
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applying
for the
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job
are seeking candidates from the Mechanical Engineering field, with fine experiences in the quality and maintenance. They have called for the position of Assistant Manager at the maintenance department.
Hence
, this is the
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job
title I am
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applying
for;
moreover
, for which I need a reference
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letter
from you.
Thus
, with this
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letter
I will be able to convince and prove them I am apt for this leadership position.

Would you be kind
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enough
to give me a reference
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letter
for
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job
which I am
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applying
for? In that
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letter
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please
Did you mean simply "mention my"? You do not need the word "about" here.
mention about my
personal traits, my working capabilities, and
also
about my team work and leadership qualities. I would be grateful if you can do
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so
.

I look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

Rama Nair
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IELTS letter You are applying for a job in an international company. You would like to ask your previous employer to write a reference letter for you. Write a letter to your previous manager. In your letter remind your manager of the job you previously held in the company tell him / her what position you are applying for and why you want it ask him / her to provide you with a reference letter

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  American English
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6.0
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