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Dear Ms. Gam I am writing to thank you for your wonderful teaching to me. From the bottom of my heart, you are not only an English teacher but also a close friend encouraging me in such hard cases. At the age of 17, when I was a lazy pupil and felt that learning was very boring, you came and gave me the inspiration that I can not learn anywhere and your advice has helped my future a lot. If you had just cared me when you were my teacher, perhaps you would have been like other teachers. However, you always contact me, give me good counsel for my learning and my daily life. That’s why, you are like my second - mother. I wish you happiness, health, and success. You are certain to receive good things what you gave. No word can describe my heart to you but the most important thing is that so long as. Once again, thank you for your helped and supported. Yours sincerely, Lai Ha.
Dear Ms.
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I am writing to thank you for your wonderful teaching to me. From the bottom of my heart, you are not
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only
an English teacher
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but
also
a close friend encouraging me in such
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hard
cases.

At the age of 17, when I was a lazy pupil and felt that learning was
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very
boring, you came and gave me the inspiration that I can not learn anywhere and your advice has
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helped
my future a lot. If you had
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just
cared me when you were my teacher, perhaps you would have been like other teachers.
However
, you always contact me, give me
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good
counsel for my learning and my daily life. That’s why, you are like my second
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mother.

I wish you happiness, health, and success. You are certain to receive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
things what you gave. No word can
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describe
my heart to you
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but
the most
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important
thing is that
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so
long as.

Once again, thank you for your
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helped
and supported.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Ha.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to thank your teacher

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  American English
6 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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