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write a letter to your friend talking about your last vacation

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Dear Jenny, I really wish to write back to you as soon as possible, but I have been so snowed under with work recently that I can hardly find a spare moment to write you a letter. I want to tell you about my trip to Korea. First I took a voyage to the famous Jeju island. The beach was crowded with hordes of tourists, but such hustle and bustle was what truly attracted me. The next day I had a wonderful time at the Gyeongbokgung Palace - the national folk museum of Korea where I could learn a whole lot about Korean distinguished customs. All in all, it was the most amazing, eye-opening trip I have taken so far. When will you be back in Vietnam? I am really looking forward to see you. Sincerely, Vinh Thinh
Dear Jenny, I
really
wish to write back to you as
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soon
as possible,
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but
I have been
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so
snowed under with work recently that I can hardly find a spare moment to write you a letter.

I want to
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tell
you about my trip to Korea.
First
I took a voyage to the
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famous
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Jeju
island. The beach
was crowded
with hordes of tourists,
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but
such hustle and bustle was what
truly
attracted me. The
next
day I had a wonderful time at the
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Gyeongbokgung
Palace
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the national folk museum of Korea where I could learn a
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whole lot
about Korean distinguished customs. All in all, it was the most amazing, eye-opening trip I have taken
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so
far. When will you be back in Vietnam? I am
really
looking forward to
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see
you.
Sincerely
,
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Vinh
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Thinh

IELTS letter write a letter to your friend talking about your last vacation

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
137 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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