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Need for a better accommodation

Need for a better accommodation eEdkK

Dear sir or madam, There is something I need help with. It's about the college room that I currently have for accommodation. The room is not particularly encouraging for my study work routine. There are a number of problems I am currently facing with the room. Firstly, the room is too tight and small. It doesn't even allow me to stretch my legs fully. Secondly, the lighting in this room is very poor and night time study work is almost impossible. Also, my bed and the mattress are both not very comfortable to rest on at all. I find myself wishing for a better more accommodating room. Personally, I would much prefer a more spacious room with better lighting. Also, I would be able to work much better in a room that has better ventilation. Please allow me an accommodation room that has more comfortable bed and mattress with better bathroom access as well. Waiting for your positive response.

Dear sir or madam,

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