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Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation Write at least 150 words.

Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation 86BB5
Dear Mr. Browse I am writing regarding to my preference for the location of the accommodation that I and my family may live in the future As you may know, I am an engineer mechanical, I have two children and a wonderful wife. We all love nature and would like to be close to it. I have a strong love for the sky blue color and so coincidently my family also likes that. I would appreciate it if you could advise me of some options for accommodation for my family. Our placement to live it is cover by the minimalist color. In light of fact that we love nature so that it should be close to it. I and my children's have a special love with swimming so I would like own it
Dear Mr. Browse

I am writing
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regarding to
my preference for the location of the accommodation that I and my family may
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in the future

As you may know, I am an engineer mechanical, I have two children and a wonderful wife. We all
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love
nature and would like to be close to it. I have a strong
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love
for the sky blue color and
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so
coincidently
my family
also
likes that.

I would appreciate it if you could advise me of
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some
options for accommodation for my family. Our placement to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
it is cover by the minimalist color. In light of fact that we
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
love
nature
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so
that it should be close to it. I and my children's have a special
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
love
with swimming
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so
I would like
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own
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it
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IELTS letter Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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  American English
4 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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