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Hello teacher, today I will talk about an event I've attended before. The name of the event is the Vietnam Championship Series. It is about League of Legends, which is a very popular and attractive game for young people today. The event was held in Ho Chi Minh City at 8: 00 PM on July 18, 2021. In this game, two teams will face each other in the game. They will fight together until their goal is to destroy the enemy's main house. That day I wore a black shirt with black jeans. I enjoy the match, because my idol is here. It was a memorable event because it is the development of e-sports that is gaining popularity in the world and present in Vietnam. I can talk to people about my favorite area and make friends with a lot of people in all regions. Finally, I hope I can go to another contest with my best friend next time.

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