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Write a letter to owner of your house who has requested to increase the rent

Write a letter to owner of your house who has requested to increase the rent 8xpGP
Dear Mr. Thomas, I am writing this letter regarding your request of increasing the rent of your apartment where I am currently living with my family. We shifted to this house last year in the month of April and signed the lease agreement for 2 years. In the agreement, it is clearly mentioned that rent will remain the same for this time-period. Hence, I would request you to re-check the details. In addition to this, I have recently lost my job due to Covid-19 pandemic situation and facing challenges in managing the household expenses. In such a situation, there is no possibility for me to take on extra burden of rent hike. As we have a legal agreement, I am in no boundation of agreeing to your unrealistic demands. I do not want to take any legal actions, hence would request you to be considerate. In case, you still want to take this further, then you will leave me with no option, otherthan filling a complaint with society and local police. I have attached a copy of our rental contract and highlighted the section where terms and conditions are mentioned related to rent to be paid. I would request you to please have a look and re-think over your decision. Your sincerely, Harjeet Kaur
Dear Mr. Thomas,

I am writing this letter regarding your
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request
of increasing the
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rent
of your apartment where I am
currently
living with my family.

We shifted to this
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house
last year in the month of April and signed the lease agreement for 2 years. In the agreement, it is
clearly
mentioned that
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rent
will remain the same for this time-period.
Hence
, I would
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request
you to re-
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check
the
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details
.
In addition
to this, I have recently lost my job due to Covid-19 pandemic situation and facing challenges in managing the household expenses. In such a situation, there is no possibility for me to take on extra burden of
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rent
hike.

As we have a legal agreement, I am in no
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boundation
of agreeing to your unrealistic demands. I do not want to take any legal actions,
hence
would
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request
you to be considerate. In case, you
still
want to take this
further
, then you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
me with no option,
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otherthan
filling a complaint with society and local police.

I have attached a copy of our rental contract and highlighted the section where terms and conditions
are mentioned
related to
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rent
to
be paid
. I would
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request
you to
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please
have a look and re-
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think
over your decision.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

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Harjeet
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Kaur
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IELTS letter Write a letter to owner of your house who has requested to increase the rent

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
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