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letter to address my concern regarding the poor condition of the road n front of my housing society.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to address my concern regarding the poor condition of the road n front of my housing society. My name is Harjeet Kaur and I live in a society called Green Archer which is in the city Noida, Uttar Pradesh. I would like to draw your attention to the inconvenience faced by the residents of this and nearby society everyday. Due to the damaged road, people are facing challenges in driving their vehicles which is leading to the increase on the number of accidents in the area. Also, as many cars are parked on the adjacent road, there has been substantial spike in car theft and in last one month, society members have registered 10 complaints. Despite of several complaints, no concreate action has been taken yet. As the president of the society and on behalf of my society members, I would request you to take immediate action towards the re-construction of road with quality material as the same road was constructed 2 years back only. I have attached the copy of the complaint letters we have sent earlier and also series of concerns raised by nearby residents. I would look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Samantha Williams
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to address my concern regarding the poor condition of the
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road
n front of my housing society.

My name is
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Harjeet
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Kaur
and I
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live
in a
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called Green Archer which is in the city Noida, Uttar Pradesh.

I would like to draw your attention to the inconvenience faced by the residents of this and nearby
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society
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
. Due to the damaged
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road
,
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people
are facing challenges in driving their vehicles which is leading to the increase on the number of accidents in the area.
Also
, as
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many
cars
are parked
on the adjacent
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road
, there has been substantial spike in car theft and in last one month,
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society
members have registered 10 complaints.
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Despite of
several complaints, no
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concreate
action has
been taken
yet
.

As the president of the
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society
and on behalf of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
members, I would request you to take immediate action towards the re-construction of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
with quality material as the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
was constructed
2 years back
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only
. I have attached the copy of the complaint letters we have
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sent
earlier and
also
series of concerns raised by nearby residents.

I would look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully


Samantha Williams
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IELTS letter letter to address my concern regarding the poor condition of the road n front of my housing society.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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