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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain about the poor service provided by your airlines’ staff available at Delhi domestic airport due to which I missed my flight on 17th September. I booked a flight from Delhi to Mumbai to attend a business meeting. However, due to confusion with one of your ground staff member, I received an incorrect boarding pass. I realised about this error, when I reached the gate number mentioned on the pass and the representative available there asked me to get the details re-verify from the same counter from where I check-in. On the same day, there was an important conference in Mumbai with one of my biggest clients. However, because of your internal error, I failed to attend the meeting and consequently, lost the business and reputation of my company. This will also have a drastic impact on the company’s revenue. As I faced the inconvenience and hassle because of this, I would like you to either provide a compensatory goodwill amount or upgrade my next 2 flights from economy to business class. I would look forward to your response. Yours faithfully Samantha Williams
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the poor service provided by your airlines’ staff available at Delhi domestic airport due to which I missed my flight on 17th September.

I booked a flight from Delhi to Mumbai to attend a business meeting.
However
, due to confusion with one of your ground staff member, I received an incorrect boarding pass. I
Possible spelling mistake. 'realised' is British English.
realised
about this error, when I reached the gate number mentioned on the pass and the representative available there asked me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
re-verify from the same counter from where I
The verb "check in" is spelled as two words. The noun 'check-in' is spelled as one.
check-in
.

On the same day, there was an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
conference in Mumbai with one of my biggest clients.
However
,
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because
of your internal error, I failed to attend the meeting and
consequently
, lost the business and reputation of my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
. This will
also
have a drastic impact on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
’s revenue.

As I faced the inconvenience and hassle
because of this
, I would like you to either provide a compensatory goodwill amount or upgrade my
next
2 flights from economy to business
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.

I would look forward to your response.

Yours
faithfully


Samantha Williams
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IELTS letter omplain about the poor service provided by your airlines’ staff

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  American English
7 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
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