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Write a letter to one of your friends to tell her/ him about the summer holiday you had

Write a letter to one of your friends to tell her/ him about the summer holiday you had nee8e
Dear Kenny, I am writing the letter to tell you about the summer holiday that I had in Viet Nam. Last summer, I went to Da Lat with my friends. We did not have too much money to go to Hanoi which is the capital of Viet Nam, so we decided on a trip to Dalat as a relaxing time. Dalat has many beautiful places that we have not ever gone to. The majority of foods were extremely cheap, such as Nem nuong, Banh mi xiu mai, banh trang nuong, … Among them, Nem nuong was my favorite food. It was cheaper than in Ha Noi. We went to the Con Ga Church, Linh Phuoc Pagoda, … There were famous places that we desire to visit for a long time, and we took a lot of photos in these places. How about your holiday? I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes, An
Dear Kenny,

I am writing the letter to
tell
you about the summer holiday that I had in
Viet
Nam.

Last summer, I went to
Da
Lat with my friends.

We did not have too much money to go to Hanoi which is the capital of
Viet
Nam,
so
we decided on a trip to
Dalat
as a relaxing time.
Dalat
has
many
beautiful
places that we have not ever gone to. The majority of foods were
extremely
cheap
, such as
Nem
nuong
,
Banh
mi
xiu
mai
,
banh
trang
nuong
, … Among them,
Nem
nuong
was my favorite food. It was cheaper than in Ha
Noi
.

We went to the Con Ga Church,
Linh
Phuoc
Pagoda, … There were
famous
places that we desire to visit for a long time, and we took
a lot of
photos in these places. How about your holiday? I look forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes,

An
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IELTS letter Write a letter to one of your friends to tell her/ him about the summer holiday you had

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  American English
7 paragraphs
153 words
5.5
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