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High School Students in Hanoi should be allowed to attend school in person again from January. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

High School Students in Hanoi should be allowed to attend school in person again from January. with this statement? JYYpw
High school students in Hanoi will be allowed to go back to school from January is information that many people are interested in. In my opinion, I partially agree with the above opinion. Here are a few reasons why students should go back to school. First, the 12th graders are the ones who are about to face the university entrance exam, so they are required to go to school directly to be able to best prepare for the exam. and so are the 10th graders, those who are in the 10th grade are new at school so it will be difficult for them to absorb new material easily. For example, people who are studying at home may not pay as much attention to the lesson as they do in class because they are surrounded by better things than in the classroom which distracts them.
High
school
students in Hanoi will be
allowed
to go back to
school
from January is information that
many
people
are interested
in. In my opinion, I
partially
agree
with the above opinion.

Here are a few reasons why students should go back to
school
.
First
, the 12th graders are the ones who are about to face the university entrance exam,
so
they
are required
to go to
school
directly
to be able to best prepare for the exam.
and
so
are the 10th graders, those who are in the 10th grade are new at
school
so
it will be difficult for them to absorb new material
easily
.
For example
,
people
who are studying at home may not pay as much attention to the lesson as they do in
class
because
they
are surrounded
by better things than in the classroom which distracts them.
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IELTS letter High School Students in Hanoi should be allowed to attend school in person again from January. with this statement?

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