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Letter of Statement Australia

Letter of Statement Australia PMdkK

Since childhood, I loved making cakes and desserts. After I graduated from the Bachelor of Accounting, I decided to study Patisserie at Le Cordon Bleu, Melbourne Campus, Australia. I chose to take the Certificate of Patisserie to deepen my skills and expertise in patisserie. I choose Le Cordon Bleu, Melbourne Campus, Australia because I believe that Le Cordon Bleu is a campus that already has high standards, a famous name, and the best campus in the field of Patisserie in Australia, where Australia is one of the countries that are famous in the culinary field and have a good career path in Australia. Why did I choose Australia as a destination country to study? Because Australia is the best country to gain knowledge and experience. And why I chose Melbourne, because Melbourne is a student city from all over the world and in Melbourne there are also many culinary, from street food to famous restaurants there. I understand my obligation to maintain sufficient funds for me to pay overseas health cover, all education expenses, living expenses, and travel expenses while I study and live in Australia. I also understood the right to work when I studied in Australia and acknowledge that the income I earned from part - time work or placement was only used to increase the cost of living only and not a source to pay my tuition fees. I hope that after I graduate from Le Cordon Bleu, Melbourne Campus, Australia and gain experience while living in Australia, I can apply all my knowledge in the work and I can open my own cake shop in the future.

Since childhood, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admiredadored
loved
 making cakes and desserts. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 I graduated from the Bachelor Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphof.of!of?of:of,of;
of


Accounting, I decided to study 'Patisserie' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "pâtisserie"Pâtisserie
Patisserie
 at Le Cordon Possible spelling mistake found.BlueBlewBledBEUBLEBLU
Bleu
, Melbourne You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
Campus
, Australia. I

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterChose
chose
 to take the Certificate of 'Patisserie' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "pâtisserie"Pâtisserie
Patisserie
 to deepen my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and expertise in 'patisserie' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "pâtisserie"pâtisserie
patisserie
.

I choose Le Cordon Possible spelling mistake found.BlueBlewBledBEUBLEBLU
Bleu
, Melbourne You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
Campus
, Australia This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I believe that Le Cordon

Possible spelling mistake found.BlueBlewBledBEUBLEBLU
Bleu
 is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
 that already has high standards, a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 name, and the best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
campus
 in the

field of 'Patisserie' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "pâtisserie"Pâtisserie
Patisserie
 in Australia, where Australia is one of the countries that are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 in the

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCulinary
culinary
 field and have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 career path in Australia.

Why did I choose Australia as a destination country to study? This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 Australia is the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphbest.best!best?best:best,best;
best


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCountry
country
 to gain knowledge and experience. And why I chose Melbourne, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphMelbourne.Melbourne!Melbourne?Melbourne:Melbourne,Melbourne;
Melbourne


is a student city from all over the world and in Melbourne there are also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 culinary, from

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterStreet
street
 food to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 restaurants there.

I understand my obligation to maintain sufficient funds for me to pay overseas health cover,

all education expenses, living expenses, and travel expenses while I study and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in

Australia.

I also
 understood the right to work when I studied in Australia and acknowledge that the

income I earned from part Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
 time work or placement was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to increase the cost of

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLiving
living
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 and not a source to pay my tuition fees.

I hope that after I graduate from Le Cordon Possible spelling mistake found.BlueBlewBledBEUBLEBLU
Bleu
, Melbourne You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsquaredorm
Campus
, Australia and gain

experience while living in Australia, I can apply all my knowledge in the work and I can open

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 cake shop in the future. 