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You recently saw an advertisement in a local newspaper regarding some vacancies in a local departmental store / supermarket. Write to the recruiting officer. In your letter the post for which you are applying give details about your experience why you want to get this job

You recently saw an advertisement in a local newspaper regarding some vacancies in a local departmental store / supermarket. Write to the recruiting officer. In your letter the post for which you are applying give details about your experience why you want to get this job VEWQ6

Dear sir I am writing this letter in regards to announcement of vacant spaces in your departmental store. And I am willing to put in for the post of cashier, As I had been graduated in accounts as well in finance. Moreover, I have a valuable experience of 4 years in different malls, supermarket, and groceries store as a cashier and expert in maintaining balance sheets and ledgers to evaluate the overall progress of the company. Additionally, I have good bilingual communication skills in both English and French and would like to interact people having diverse culture. I really want to get this opportunity because nowadays I am jobless due to this pandemic situation Furthermore, I am full time student and faces many difficulties to survive in these tough times. I would be highly glad if you give this golden chance to me and expect to hear from you soon and thanks for giving attention on this letter Yours faithfully Shahbaz

Dear sir

I am writing this letter Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 announcement of vacant spaces in your departmental store. And I am willing to put in for the post of cashier, As I had been graduated
 in accounts as well
 in finance.

Moreover
, I have a valuable experience of 4 years in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 malls, supermarket, and groceries store as a cashier and expert in maintaining balance sheets and ledgers to evaluate the overall
 progress of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Additionally
, I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 bilingual communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 in both English and French and would like to interact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 having diverse culture.

I really
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 this opportunity This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 nowadays I am jobless due to this pandemic situation Furthermore
, I am full time student and faces This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 difficulties to survive in these tough times. I would be highly
 glad if you give this golden chance to me and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 to hear from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and thanks for giving attention on this Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphletter.letter!letter?letter:letter,letter;
letter


Yours faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.Shabbat
Shahbaz