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Write a letter to local authorities to include an additional sports. Mention current facilities, what kind of additional sports is required and how it will help you.

Write a letter to local authorities to include an additional sports. Mention current facilities, what kind of additional sports is required and how it will help you. aqnmm

Dear Sir/Ma’am, I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards the growing needs of more sports facilities, especially, among the age group of 12 to 16 years. Currently, at our stadium, we are having sports facilities related to indoor and outdoor activities which mainly includes Chess, Billiards, Table Tennis, Lawn Tennis, Football, Basket Ball, Volley Ball and Tracks. I must thank you and admit that these facilities are very good and are being maintained well from the funds received from the concerned organisation. However, as you know Cricket is getting very popular these days, therefore, we kindly request you to consider the inclusion of Cricket as the funded sports. This will require a dedicated pitch and ground area where we will be able to train. Further, as we do not have a national team for our country yet in Cricket, so, consideration and addition of the Cricket as a sports will boost our morale and we will have a dedicated area to hone our skills. I hope our request will be understood and we thank you for the kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Jack

Dear Sir/Ma’am,

I am writing this letter to bring your attention towards the growing needs of more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facilities, especially
, among the age group of 12 to 16 years.

Currently
, at our stadium, we are having You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facilities related to indoor and outdoor activities which mainly
 includes Chess, Billiards, Table Tennis, Lawn Tennis, Football, Basket Ball, Volley Ball and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
Tracks
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 thank you and admit that these facilities are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 and are being maintained
 well from the funds received from the concerned Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
.

However
, as you know You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfairdecenthonestunbiasedreasonablestable
Cricket
 is getting This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 popular these days, therefore
, we kindly request you to consider the inclusion of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfairdecenthonestunbiasedreasonablestable
Cricket
 as the funded You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
. This will require a dedicated pitch and ground area where we will be able to train.

Further
, as we do not have a national team for our country yet
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfairdecenthonestunbiasedreasonablestable
Cricket
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, consideration and addition of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfairdecenthonestunbiasedreasonablestable
Cricket
 as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 will boost our Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).morale, and
morale and
 we will have a dedicated area to hone our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
.

I hope our request will be Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).understood, and
understood and
 we thank you for the kind consideration.

Yours faithfully
,

Jack