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Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports for your age group in your area

Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports for your age group in your area MO6N
Dear Sir, IAM Sara, a resident of Rosewood town, IAM writing to you this letter to request you to provide us with new sports facilities for the population of our area. Presently, we have an immense lack of places to practice sport in which can badly affects people’s health and mood, especially children. For the moment, there is a dumping area behind the high school where people throw trash, children frequently play football and cricket there. Hence, I would like to ask you to build an appropriate public club including a swimming pool, tennis and football ground and a fitness area if possible. Furthermore, I would like to suggest to you to reconstruct the neighborhood garden which is in extremely bad state to encourage people to walk or run after work which stimulate the brain to work in better conditions and reduce stress and regulate blood pressure. Undoubtedly, your consideration of this matter will be highly appreciated by the residents of the neighborhood and it will positively affect their well-being. Yours faithfully.
Dear Sir,

IAM Sara, a resident of Rosewood town, IAM writing to you this letter to request you to provide us with new sports facilities for the population of our area.

Presently
, we have an immense lack of places to practice sport in which can
badly
affects
people
’s health and mood,
especially
children.

For the moment, there is a dumping area behind the high school where
people
throw trash, children
frequently
play football and cricket there.

Hence
, I would like to ask you to build an appropriate public club including a swimming pool, tennis and football ground and a fitness area if possible.

Furthermore
, I would like to suggest to you to reconstruct the neighborhood garden which is in
extremely
bad
state to encourage
people
to walk or run after work which stimulate the brain to work in better conditions and
reduce
stress
and regulate blood pressure.

Undoubtedly
, your consideration of this matter will be
highly
appreciated by the residents of the neighborhood and it will
positively
affect their well-being.

Yours
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports for your age group in your area

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  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
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