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Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age in your area. Mention about the current sports facilities available. What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in connection with the sports facilities in our area. I am Sejal, and I am an accountant. I live in Motavarachha area which is known as a developing area in our city. Let me discuss in brief, we have a playground in our area, but with inadequate sports facilities in it. Currently, there are only a few things available in the name of sports instruments such as running track, cricket playground with well-furnished pitch. However, sports is not limited to only these games. In modern time, there are many other games well-known all over the world like badminton, tennis, football, volleyball, and basketball which need to be developed with its all required facilities. The person like me find difficulties to play these games like this at this playground as it has not enough space as well as the sports instruments to practice. I would suggest that if the facilities in the playground for all the above-mentioned games will be available, then It would be very helpful to the people of my age and profession. Sports is very helpful to be fit and healthy for the people of our areas as it burns calories results in disease-free life. I would be very grateful if you would think and act on this matter to enhance the various sports facilities in our area. Yours Faithfully, Sejal
Dear Sir,

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sports
facilities in our
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. I am
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Sejal
, and I am an accountant.
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Motavarachha
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area
which
is known
as a developing
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area
in our city.

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Let
me discuss
in brief
, we have a
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playground
in our
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area
,
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but
with inadequate
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sports
facilities in it.
Currently
, there are
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only
a few things available in the name of
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sports
instruments such as running
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track
, cricket
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playground
with well-furnished pitch.
However
,
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sports
is not limited to
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only
these
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games
. In modern time, there are
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many
other
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games
well-known all over the world like badminton, tennis, football, volleyball, and basketball which need to
be developed
with its all required facilities.

The person like me find difficulties to play these
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games
like this at this
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playground
as it has not
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enough
space
as well
as the
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sports
instruments to practice. I would suggest that if the facilities in the
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playground
for all the above-mentioned
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games
will be available, then It would be
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very
helpful to the
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people
of my age and profession.
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Sports
is
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very
helpful to
be fit
and healthy for the
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people
of our
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areas
as it burns calories results in disease-free life.

I would be
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very
grateful if you would
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think
and act on this matter to enhance the various
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sports
facilities in our area.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Sejal
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IELTS letter Write a letter to local authorities by requesting additional sports facilities for your age in your area. Mention about the current sports facilities available. What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? How the new sports facilities would be a help for the people in your age group.

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