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10 ) You had arranged to meet a friend next week, but you have realised that you will not be able to go. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • cancel the meeting with your friend and apologise • explain why you will not be able to meet your friend • suggest where and when you could see each other Write at least 150 word

Dear Love, I hope you’re doing fine. I regret to say that I won’t be able to meet you as promised and hope that you’ll forgive me. I’m so sorry that I have to put off our meeting! It’s a shame that I couldn’t stick to the plan to meet you next Tuesday. I don’t have enough words to express my regret at having to postpone the meeting to another day. The truth is I’m under tremendous work pressure and also in danger of losing my job if I don’t meet a sales target. I have to visit a potential customer next Tuesday. This is why I’m compelled to cancel our meeting. I really hope you’ll understand my situation. By the way to make up for this, I have booked a table for us both in your favourite restaurant, The Royal, for next Saturday at 7: 00 PM. I hope you can make it. See you soon. Warm wishes, jatin
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I hope you’re doing fine. I regret to say that I won’t be able to
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meet
you as promised and

hope that you’ll forgive me.
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so
sorry that I
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have to
put off our meeting! It’s a shame that

I couldn’t stick to the plan to
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meet
you
next
Tuesday. I don’t have
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enough
words to express

my regret at having to postpone the meeting to another day.

The truth is I’m under tremendous work pressure and
also
in
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danger
of losing my job if I

don’t
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meet
a sales target. I
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have to
visit a potential customer
next
Tuesday. This is why I’m

compelled to cancel our meeting.

I
really
hope you’ll understand my situation. By the way to
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make
up for this, I have booked

a table for us both in your
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favourite
restaurant, The Royal, for
next
Saturday at 7: 00 PM. I

hope you can
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make
it.

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See
you
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soon
.

Warm wishes,

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jatin
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IELTS letter 10 ) You had arranged to meet a friend next week, but you have realised that you will not be able to go. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • cancel the meeting with your friend and apologise • explain why you will not be able to meet your friend • suggest where and when you could see each other Write at least 150 word

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  American English
7 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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