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Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do. MMrlk
Dear Bill I am writing to you to inform you about an electrical hitch in my apartment that requires your cognizance. My parents have concerns about their safety measures and they are perturbed because we shifted here just before 2 weeks. Let me please allow to elaborate on the problem that is going on. Actually, one of the yellow lights in the washroom does not work correctly, and makes noise while operating. The reason why I would like to fix it immediately is not only hard to be in a restroom without enough light, but also my parents are older who require a hazard-free facility. On top of that, a tap of washroom over the sink is leaking from the last 2 days; consequently, the walls of bathroom get more humidity than usual. Having an asthma, a humid environment causes a glitch in my breathing. I request you to visit my home and check out what are the stumbling blocks we have and riddle it out as fast as you can. I would appreciate your attention and solution. Yours sincerely, Sarah
Dear Bill

I am writing to you to inform you about an electrical hitch in my apartment that requires your cognizance. My parents have concerns about their safety
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measures and
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are perturbed
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we shifted here
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before
2 weeks.
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Let
me
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please
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allow
to elaborate on the problem
that is
going on.

Actually, one of the yellow lights in the washroom does not work
correctly
, and
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makes
noise while operating. The reason why I would like to
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fix
it immediately is not
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only
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hard
to be in a restroom without
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enough
light,
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but
also
my parents are older who require a hazard-free facility.
On top of that
, a tap of washroom over the sink is leaking from the last 2 days;
consequently
, the walls of bathroom
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get
more humidity than usual. Having an asthma, a humid environment causes a glitch in my breathing.

I request you to visit my home and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
out what are the stumbling blocks we have and riddle it out as
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fast
as you can. I would appreciate your attention and solution.

Yours
sincerely
,

Sarah
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IELTS letter Write a letter to landlord about the one or two problems you have in the house you moved to before 15 days with your family. What are issues and tell what you want him to do.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
180 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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