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Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged. In your letter, you should say: • Details of how you won the prize • What the prize you are going to get • What actions you expect to be taken.

Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged. In your letter, you should say: • Details of how you won the prize • What the prize you are going to get • What actions you expect to be taken. e5AKG
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter regarding the prize collection, which I had won at the Daily Network Fair held on the 5th of June by your newspaper. The contest consisted of a series of question regarding the history of various paper companies, and fortunately, I was able to win that tournament. It was an extremely tricky and intriguing game, but I had been preparing for this for almost a year, so I guess all the hard work finally paid-off. It was announced during the competition that the winner would receive a cheque for 10, 000$, and a lifetime premium member of the Guardian Press company which give access to live and unlimited news online. Since I have not received the cheque as yet, so I would appreciate if you could transfer the funds directly to my bank account. The details of it are enclosed in an attachment below. Additionally, the premium membership has not been fomented as yet, so could you provide the respective ID and password for it. Either you can email them or message me using the information provided along with the account details. I hope you would take the necessary action. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Shakib Qureshi
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the prize collection, which I had won at the Daily Network
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Fair
held on the 5th of June by your newspaper.

The contest consisted of a series of question regarding the history of various paper
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companies
, and
fortunately
, I was able to win that tournament. It was an
extremely
tricky and intriguing game,
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but
I had been preparing for this for almost a year,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I guess all the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work
finally
paid-off.

It
was announced
during the competition that the winner would receive a
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
for 10,
The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: "$000".
000$
, and a lifetime premium member of the Guardian Press
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
which give access to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
and unlimited news online.

Since I have not received the
Possible spelling mistake. 'cheque' is British English.
cheque
as
yet
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I would appreciate if you could transfer the funds
directly
to my bank account. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of it
are enclosed
in an attachment below.
Additionally
, the premium membership has not
been fomented
as
yet
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
could you provide the respective ID and password for it. Either you can email them or message me using the information provided along with the account
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
. I hope you would take the necessary action.

Thanking you.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Shakib
Qureshi
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IELTS letter Write a letter to editor of the newspaper for claiming prize which they acknowledged. In your letter, you should say: • Details of how you won the prize • What the prize you are going to get • What actions you expect to be taken.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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