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Write a letter to hotel manager about your bad experience.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writting with regard to inform you about my last visit to your hotel Sunshine at Torronto on 2nd February 2021. Unfortunatly my experience with your hospitality was very disoppinting. When i arrived at your hotel, I had to wait for an hour because there was no one at the reception desk to help me check in. Things got even more unpleasent when i got to know that the room i booked which has garden view was not availabe so, i had to switch to the regular room. In addition, when i call for room service i got extermely rude response form your side. Therefore, i want to request for a refund because i was not offered what i was expecting. i look forward for your prompt response. Yours faithfully, Shaishav Patel
Dear Sir/Madam

I am
writting
with regard to inform you about my last visit to your hotel Sunshine at
Torronto


on 2nd February 2021.
Unfortunatly
my experience with your hospitality was
very
disoppinting
.

When
i
arrived at your hotel, I had to wait for an hour
because
there was no one at the reception desk to
help
me
check
in.

Things
got
even more
unpleasent
when
i
got
to know that the room
i
booked which has garden view was not
availabe
so
,
i
had to switch

to
the regular room.
In addition
, when
i
call for room service
i
got
extermely
rude response form your side.

Therefore
,
i
want to request for a refund
because
i
was not offered what
i
was expecting.

i
look forward for your prompt response.

Yours
faithfully
,

Shaishav
Patel
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IELTS letter Write a letter to hotel manager about your bad experience.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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