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Dear Ankit I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter because we cannot get a chance to talk after the work last Monday. I need your favour, i have been held the conference in the upcoming week. It will organize in the Niagara park on the 14th may morning 10 am. The conference about effects of social sites. I would like you join this conference as a speaker. Which panellist we confirmed for the presentation they could not come due to covid-19 instructions. So, i believe you are expert for this because you have more experience of application as well as you do not need practice to perform. if you accept it i will arrange pickup and drop facility. Apart from it, the end of conference i will arranged the dinner at 9'o clock. i will insist you. I look forward to hearing back from you. your best regard, Gurpreet
Dear Ankit

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter
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because
we cannot
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get
a chance to talk after the work last Monday. I need your
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favour
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have
been held
the
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conference
in the upcoming week. It will organize in the Niagara park on the 14th may morning 10 am. The
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conference
about effects of social sites. I would like you
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join
this
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conference
as a speaker.

Which
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panellist
we confirmed for the presentation they could not
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come
due to
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid-19
instructions.
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So
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
believe you are expert for this
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because
you have more experience of application
as well
as you do not need
The verb 'practice' is used with the gerund form: "practice performing".
practice to perform
.

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if
you accept it
Did you mean "I"?
i
will arrange pickup and drop facility. Apart from it, the
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end
of
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conference
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "arrange"
arranged
the dinner at 9'o clock.
Did you mean "I"?
i
will insist you. I look forward to hearing back from you.

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your
best regard,

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Gurpreet

IELTS letter write a letter to frnd invite in conference as a speaker

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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