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A preparotary company needs an english teacher, who can give children english courses. Write a letter of application

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of English teacher which I saw advertised in today's edition of local newspaper The Scientist and I should like to apply to be a member of your preparatory company Smart English. I am thirty three years old and have an obtained degree in Teaching English as a Foreign Language at University of World Languages in 2010. Since leaving University I have been working at school as an english teacher. After the lessons I desire to be occupied with some courses, which are concerning English. I feel I have many of important qualifications needed for this job. I am made to feel myself in another world when I am teaching in the classroom. Because of the having proactive and outgoing charecter, I have never come across any difficult situations. I am currently looking for a job that will let me to improve my skills and experience. Besides that, I have been attending Eilts and Cefr classes in order to achieve high score. I go in doing some outdoor activities such as planting new sort of flowers and playing any games with my kids. If you would like me to attend an interview, I would be able to come at any time convenient to you, as I do want to get a work in your company. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Zulxumor Imomova
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of English teacher which I
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today
's edition of local newspaper The Scientist and I should like to apply to be a member of your preparatory
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company
Smart English.

I am
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thirty three
years
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and have an obtained degree in Teaching English as a Foreign Language at University of World Languages in 2010. Since leaving University I have been working at school as an
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english
teacher. After the lessons I desire to
be occupied
with
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some
courses, which
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are concerning
English. I feel I have
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many
of
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important
qualifications needed for this job. I
am made
to feel myself in another world when I am teaching in the classroom.
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Because
of the having proactive and outgoing
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charecter
, I have never
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come
across any difficult situations. I am
currently
looking for a job that will
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let
me to
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improve
my
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skills
and experience.
Besides
that, I have been attending
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Eilts
and
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Cefr
classes in order to achieve high score.

I go in doing
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some
outdoor activities such as planting new sort of flowers and playing any games with my kids.

If you
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would like
me to attend an interview, I would be able to
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come
at any time convenient to you, as I do want to
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get
a work in your
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company
.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Zulxumor
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Imomova

IELTS letter A preparotary company needs an english teacher, who can give children english courses. Write a letter of application

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
237 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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