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write a letter to friend about job leaving

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I am writing this letter to let you know that I have decided to leave my current job. You know I am currently working in Hp It solutions ltd Wolverhampton. Due to the covid, majority buyer companies are reducing their purchasing from my company. So they are in a financial crisis. The management of my current company is planning to reduce the staffs or cut down the wages. The management persuades the staff to voluntary retirement. So I am looking for a new job.
I am writing this letter to
let
you know that I have decided to
leave
my
current
job. You know I am
currently
working in Hp
It solutions
ltd Wolverhampton. Due to the
covid
, majority buyer
companies
are reducing their purchasing from my
company
.
So
they are in a financial crisis. The management of my
current
company
is planning to
reduce
the staffs or
cut
down the wages. The management persuades the staff to voluntary retirement.
So
I am looking for a new job.
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IELTS letter write a letter to friend about job leaving

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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