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write a letter to friend about job leaving

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I am writing this letter to let you know that I have decided to leave my current job. You know I am currently working in Hp It solutions ltd Wolverhampton. Due to the covid, majority buyer companies are reducing their purchasing from my company. So they are in a financial crisis. The management of my current company is planning to reduce the staffs or cut down the wages. The management persuades the staff to voluntary retirement. So I am looking for a new job.

I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I have decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 job. You know I am currently
 working in Hp Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'It'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
It solutions
 ltd Wolverhampton. Due to the Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid
, majority buyer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 are reducing their purchasing from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 they are in a financial crisis. The management of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the staffs or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down the wages. The management persuades the staff to voluntary retirement. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I am looking for a new job. 

IELTS letter write a letter to friend about job leaving

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

84 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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