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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take Lxq1
Dear John My self Cris, I am writting this letter for the disturbance caused by my self. I have started the house renovation, to get this work complete it requires the machinearies which will produce the loude noise. Requirement of these equipments is necessary to remove the flooring and walls. Please consider my apology for the above problem caused by me. I should have spoken to you earlier about renovation work, so that we could have agreed to do work without disturbing you. I know you have littel childern's and elders in your family who will find irritated by this king of noises. I will stop the machine wokr immidately so that there will be no loude noises, and I will ristrict the work timings to 2 to 3 hours a day. If it is necessary to use machiens we will get your permitions to use for stipulated duration. And this work will be done by one week. I hope you will accept my apology. Yours Faithfully Cris
Dear John

My self
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Cris
, I am
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writting
this letter for the disturbance caused by my self.

I have
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started
the
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house
renovation, to
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get
this
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work
complete it requires the
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machinearies
which will produce the
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loude
noise. Requirement of these equipments is necessary to remove the flooring and walls.

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Please
consider my apology for the above problem caused by me. I should have spoken to you earlier about renovation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
,
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so
that we could have
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agreed
to do
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work
without disturbing you. I know you have
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littel
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childern
's and elders in your family who will find irritated by this king of noises.

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I
will
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stop
the machine
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wokr
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immidately
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so
that there will be no
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loude
noises, and I will
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ristrict
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
timings to 2 to 3 hours a day. If it is necessary to
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use
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machiens
we will
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get
your
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permitions
to
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use
for stipulated duration. And this
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work
will
be done
by one week.

I hope you will accept my apology.

Yours
Faithfully


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Cris

IELTS letter Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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