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Your parents will be celebrating their 5t0h anniversary next month .You are planning a big celebration ,But you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable .But you have a friend who can help

Your parents will be celebrating their 5t0h anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, But you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. But you have a friend who can help GjWj

Dear Julia, I hope this letter find you in good health and best of spirit, I’ve been looking for a professional event planner from plethora amount of time and you would be the best person on whom I can count on. Actually it’s my parents 50th wedding anniversary which is I am thinking to celebrate it but I i don’t have any clue how to make this event most memorable and remarkable which they would cherish rest of their life and I hope you could be best person who can assist me by giving professional guidance. By the way, this 50th anniversary is going to be a special occasion for my parents as they have been through many ups and down In their life, and yet their love for each other seems to be as fresh and deep as the day they got married. I have planned to buy them some presents and also created a slide show of their memorable journey so far and, Besides this I am planning to organize an event for them but am in dilemma whom should we invite, what would be the décor look like, Food preference etc. Hence, Block your date on Sunday afternoon on 20thmarch at café beach house so that I can discuss my further plans with you while borrowing some of your expert ideas and assist me in making this event successful. Best wishes,

Dear Julia,

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Best wishes, 