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a welcome letter to fresh overseas students

a welcome letter to fresh overseas students 2KKWX

On behalf of Students' Union, I sincerely acknowlege our heartfelt welcome to all overseas students! First of all, it must be admitted that the school with well prestige may contibute to a quick-speed life tougher than prediction. On behalf of Students' Union, I sincerely acknowlege our heartfelt welcome to all overseas students! First of all, it must be admitted that the school with well prestige may contibute to a quick-speed life tougher than prediction.

On behalf of Students' Union, I sincerely
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acknowlege
 our heartfelt welcome to all overseas students! This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
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, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be admitted
 that the school with well prestige may Possible spelling mistake found.contribute
contibute
 to a quick-speed life tougher than prediction. On behalf of Students' Union, I sincerely
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acknowlege
 our heartfelt welcome to all overseas students!

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
be admitted
 that the school with well prestige may Possible spelling mistake found.contribute
contibute
 to a quick-speed life tougher than prediction. 

IELTS letter a welcome letter to fresh overseas students

Letter

American English

2 paragraphs

74 words

This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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