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a welcome letter to fresh overseas students

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On behalf of Students' Union, I sincerely acknowlege our heartfelt welcome to all overseas students! First of all, it must be admitted that the school with well prestige may contibute to a quick-speed life tougher than prediction. On behalf of Students' Union, I sincerely acknowlege our heartfelt welcome to all overseas students! First of all, it must be admitted that the school with well prestige may contibute to a quick-speed life tougher than prediction.
On behalf of Students' Union, I
sincerely
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acknowlege
our heartfelt welcome to all overseas students!
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be admitted
that the school with well prestige may
Possible spelling mistake found.
contibute
to a quick-speed life tougher than prediction. On behalf of Students' Union, I
sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.
acknowlege
our heartfelt welcome to all overseas students!

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be admitted
that the school with well prestige may
Possible spelling mistake found.
contibute
to a quick-speed life tougher than prediction.
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IELTS letter a welcome letter to fresh overseas students

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
74 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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