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Hello everybody, my name is Nhi.

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Hello everybody, my name is Nhi. I live in Ho Chi Minh city, so I have southern accent. After graduation, I have had time working with foreigners, so I understand how hard it is in communication with native speaker. I have taught Vietnames for 1 year. It’s important to know what personal purposes want to focus for improving Vietnamese My lessons are very flexible. It’s will denpend on your Vietnamese level and what is your goal that you want to learn. There are 2 ways you can choose to learn First of all, we’ll learn the topics that you concern such as: travels, food, music, daily habits. . anything that you care The second, you can choose learning step by step, from beginer to advance about grammar, reading writing pronouciation listening to have ability to comunicate lika a native speaker. I’ll design our lesson depend on your level. I’m a patient person, so just ask me as much as possible. I hope we can go together on the way you explore about the culture, human and country of Vietnam
Hello everybody, my name is
Nhi
. I
live
in
Ho Chi Minh city
,
so
I have southern accent. After graduation, I have had time working with foreigners,
so
I understand how
hard
it is in communication with native speaker.

I have taught
Vietnames
for 1 year. It’s
important
to know what personal purposes want to focus for improving Vietnamese My lessons are
very
flexible. It’s will
denpend
on your Vietnamese level and what is your goal that you want to learn. There are 2 ways you can choose to learn

First of all
, we’ll learn the topics that you concern such as: travels, food, music, daily habits.
.
anything
that you care

The second, you can choose
learning
step by step, from
beginer
to advance about grammar, reading writing
pronouciation
listening to have ability to
comunicate
lika
a native speaker. I’ll design our lesson depend on your level.

I’m a patient person,
so
just
ask me as much as possible.

I
hope we can go together on the way you explore about the culture, human and country of Vietnam
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IELTS letter Hello everybody, my name is Nhi.

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4 paragraphs
178 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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