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2. You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday. Write a letter inviting your friend.

2. You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday. Write a letter inviting your friend. j88GX
Dear John, I hope you and your family are doing well. You didn’t write to me in ages. I remember in the last letter you had mentioned that your family had been on holiday. I hope that was a wonderful time for you. I’m writing to tell you that next weekend is a special time for me. We are throwing a big party for family and close friends on the occasion of my twentieth birthday. You should definitely come! This birthday is will be a little more special than the previous ones because the party will last about a week and will include many outdoor activities. You are one of my closest friends and my birthday would be perfect without you. I would never forget how you assisted me in overcoming language and communication barriers after I arrived in your country. If without your help, I wouldn’t have been able to integrate into the foreign community. By the way, I also set up to take you to a few significant destinations in my country after my birthday. So would you like to pack a big case and stay at my home for a few days? Hope to see you soon. Yours, Thuc Hien
Dear John,

I hope you and your family are doing well. You didn’t write to me in ages. I remember in the last letter you had mentioned that your family had been on holiday. I hope that was a wonderful time for you.

I
’m writing to
tell
you that
next
weekend is a special time for me. We are throwing a
big
party for family and close friends on the occasion of my twentieth birthday. You should definitely
come
!

This birthday is will be a
little
more special than the previous ones
because
the party will last about a week and will include
many
outdoor activities. You are one of my closest friends and my birthday would be perfect without you. I would never forget how you assisted me in overcoming language and communication barriers after I arrived in your country. If without your
help
, I wouldn’t have been able to integrate into the foreign community.

By the way, I
also
set up to take you to a few significant destinations in my country after my birthday.
So
would you like to pack a
big
case and stay at my home for a few days?

Hope to
see
you
soon
.

Yours,

Thuc
Hien
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IELTS letter 2. You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday. Write a letter inviting your friend.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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