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R. S. Colony Bazar Samiti Patna 26th May 2021 The Bank Manager State Bank of India Patna Sub: Requesting to close my savings account Dear sir/madam, I am honourable customer around 40 years of your esteemed bank- State Bank of India at Rajabazar, Patna, having a savings account no- *******3443 and my customer id is *******34. I am 80 years old and I am going to an old stage account in which I will lost my understanding capacity and health condition also; so that I could not able to come back here to doing any official requirements or regarding my account such as KYC norms, or the other etc. Thus, I request you to please close my accounts and having savings in savings account as well as in fixed deposits and Recurring deposits aslo to be transferred to my son’s account in ICICI Bank at Mukherjee Nagar, Delhi. For this, I am always grateful to you. Yours sincerely Tanvi roy
R. S. Colony

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Patna

26th May 2021

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Sub: Requesting to close my
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Dear sir/madam,

I
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customer around 40 years of your esteemed
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State
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Rajabazar
, Patna, having a
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savings
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no- *******3443 and my customer id is *******34. I am 80 years
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old and
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stage
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in which I will
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my understanding capacity and health condition
also
;
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so
that I could not able to
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come
back here to doing any official requirements or regarding my
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account
such as KYC norms, or the other etc.

Thus
, I request you to
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please
close my
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accounts
and having
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in
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savings
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account
as well
as in
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deposits and Recurring deposits
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to
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to my son’s
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in
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ICICI
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at
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Mukherjee
Nagar, Delhi. For this, I am always grateful to you.

Yours
sincerely


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