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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. 7eJ5
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Muhammed and I am one of your tenant who is living in discovery garden building 101 since 5 years. I am sure you are aware that I am responsible tenant and always pay my due on time and never got complained from neighbors. I have just renewed my contract four months back for this year as well. But I am afraid that I will not be able to complete this tenure as my company gave me better opportunity to other country and for that I have to move over there. However, this process will take two further months but even though the contract for one year will be not complete. As I am not able to continue this contract, I am requesting to finish this contract before the maturity. I know as per the rules this is not allowed but my situation is different. I hope you will reply to this letter with understanding and will return my deposit. Yours Sincerely, Muhammad Ahmed
Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Muhammed and
I am one of your tenant who is living in discovery garden building 101
Did you mean "for"? ('since' refers to a point in time, whereas 'for' refers to a period)
since
5 years. I am sure you are aware that I am responsible tenant and always pay my due on time and never
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got
complained from neighbors.

I have
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just
renewed my
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contract
four months back for this year
as well
.
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But
I am afraid that I will not be able to complete this tenure as my
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company
gave me better opportunity to other country and for that I
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have to
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move
over there.
However
, this process will take two
further
months
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but
even though
the
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contract
for one year will be not complete.

As I am not able to continue this
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contract
, I am requesting to finish this
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contract
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before
the maturity. I know as per the
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rules
this is not
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allowed
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but
my situation is
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different
. I hope you will reply to this letter with understanding and will return my deposit.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Muhammad Ahmed
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IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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