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Dear sir/madamMy name is iram, i am writing this letter to give my review regarding cooking course which i attended in your shah road branch. i was week in cutting and cooking which i learned during my cooking classess also i got skills how to arrange dinning table. During my course i found all teachers were well professional and were teaching in very easy way. Environment was much hygenic. now at home i am using all their techniques which i learnt from cooking teachers. In the end i want ro suggest some baking course if you can initiate for us to learn. I turst this suggestion will be help full for others too Your faithfully Iram
Dear sir/
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madamMy
name is
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iram
,
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i
am writing this letter to give my review regarding cooking course which
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i
attended in your shah road branch.
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i
was week in cutting and cooking which
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i
learned during my cooking
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classess
also
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i
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got
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skills
how to arrange dinning table. During my course
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i
found all teachers were well professional and were teaching in
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very
easy way. Environment was much
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hygenic
.
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now
at home
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i
am using all their techniques which
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i
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learnt
from cooking teachers. In the
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end
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i
want
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ro
suggest
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baking course if you can initiate for us to learn. I
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this suggestion will be
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help
full for others too

Your
faithfully
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Iram

IELTS letter write a letter to cooking director

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
115 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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