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Write a letter to complain that something you recently bought from mall which does not function properly. Ask for replacement.

Write a letter to complain that something you recently bought from mall which does not function properly. Ask for replacement. KlPBR
Dear, Sir. I am writing to complain about a mobile phone I bought from your technical appliances mall. As a regular customer, I would say that it the first item it did not work which one of the things I got from your market. With regard to the phone, there was not any faulty when I reviewed in the store. Further, I thought it was provided with high tech that has all conveniences and comfortable to carry. However, after a day of use it began to show its drawbacks. Firstly, when I loaded the zoom app to it, it started working hard. So, I found it could not lift that. But, this program is very crucial for me. Second of all, its microphone had a problem and it related to the sound which is made a bit of a noice. Thus, my purpose of making complain is, I want to replace it with another best one. At this point it is fair to say that you had checked it and issued the warranty card for three months. Hence, I am very unhappy with about this position. Also, I hope you will deal with this matter quickly. I look forward to hearing your response. Yours faithfully, Ann Brown.
Dear, Sir. I am writing to complain about a mobile phone I
bought
from your technical appliances mall. As a regular customer, I would say that
it
the
first
item it did not work which one of the things I
got
from your market. With regard to the phone, there was not any faulty when I reviewed in the store.
Further
, I
thought
it
was provided
with high tech that has all conveniences and comfortable to carry.
However
, after a day of
use
it began to
show
its drawbacks.
Firstly
, when I loaded the zoom app to it, it
started
working
hard
.
So
, I found it could not lift that.
But
, this program is
very
crucial for me. Second of all, its microphone had a problem and it related to the sound which
is made
a bit of a
noice
.
Thus
, my purpose of making complain is, I want to replace it with another best one. At this point it is
fair
to say that you had
checked
it and issued the warranty card for three months.
Hence
, I am
very
unhappy with about this position.
Also
, I hope you will deal with this matter
quickly
. I look forward to hearing your response. Yours
faithfully
, Ann Brown.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to complain that something you recently bought from mall which does not function properly. Ask for replacement.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
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