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Write a letter to complain about a dangerous situation when some adolescents let their dogs run wild in public.

Write a letter to complain about a dangerous situation when some adolescents let their dogs run wild in public. 0BEd3

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to Whitehorse Council in regards to a group of adolescents that regularly allow their dogs to run free at Springfield Park in Doncaster where young children can often be found using the playground equipment provided for them. Often on a Saturday morning there are a group of young people at Springfield Park who allow their dogs to run free throughout the park and threaten other users of the park, particularly the elderly and small children. On one occasion a large dog ran into a small child. Fortunately, the child although very frightened, was not harmed by the incident. However, there is the risk that one of these dogs could attack a small child or an elderly person leading to very serious consequences. I am requesting that some of your rangers visit the park on the weekend and observe the problem and take appropriate action to ensure the safety of the community, Kind regards, Michelle Harris

Dear Sir/Madam,

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 serious consequences.

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some
 of your rangers visit the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 on the weekend and observe the problem and take appropriate action to ensure the safety of the community,

Kind regards,

Michelle Harris