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motivation letter for erasmus internship

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My name is Merve Kulaoglu. I'm 20 years old. I live in Istanbul. I am studying physiotherapy and rehabilitation at Istanbul Kent University. I am a 3rd year student. I am applying to your institution as an Erasmus volunteer intern physiotherapist. I am interested in the field of Orthopedics and according to my research, more Orthopedic diseases come to your clinic. And so I think I have a lot to learn from you. In addition to the theoretical knowledge I have seen in Turkey, I want to improve myself with the practical knowledge in Poland. I believe that the perspective and vision of physicians and physiotherapists in Poland will have a significant impact on my career. I want to be useful to my patients with the important information I have learned from you. I think that it will affect my career life in a good way during the Master's period. I am eager to learn and ready to adapt myself to the new working situation. I couldn't do an internship before because it was the pandemic period, but I really wanted to do an internship. I am a member of the physiotherapy and rehabilitation club at my school. I play court tennis as a hobby and I go to fitness. I have an average of 3. 43 from the 4-point system. I have pre-intermediate level English and have already started learning your language. I chose Poland for Erasmus. Because I was very curious about Poland. It is very valuable in my country that I would be doing an internship in Poland. That's why I would like to do an internship in your clinic. I wish to be a part of your institution as it will lead me in the field where I want to work in the future. Best regards
My name is
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Merve
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Kulaoglu
. I'm 20 years
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. I
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in Istanbul.
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am studying physiotherapy and rehabilitation at Istanbul Kent University.
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am a 3rd year student.

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am applying to your institution as an Erasmus volunteer intern physiotherapist.

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am interested
in the field of Orthopedics and according to my research, more Orthopedic diseases
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to your clinic. And
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I
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I have a lot to learn from you.

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to the theoretical knowledge I have
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seen
in Turkey, I want to
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improve
myself with the practical knowledge in Poland.

I believe that the perspective and vision of physicians and physiotherapists in Poland will have a significant impact on my career.

I want to be useful to my patients with the
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important
information I have learned from you.

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I
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that it will affect my career life in a
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way during the Master's period.

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am eager to learn and ready to adapt myself to the new working situation.

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couldn't do an internship
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before
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really
wanted to do an internship.

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am a member of the physiotherapy and rehabilitation club at my school.

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play court tennis as a hobby and I go to fitness.

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have an average of 3. 43 from the 4-point system. I have
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pre-intermediate
level English and have already
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started
learning your language.

I chose Poland for Erasmus.
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curious about Poland. It is
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valuable in my country that I would be doing an internship in Poland. That's why I would like to do an internship in your clinic.

I wish to be a part of your institution as it will lead me in the field where I want to work in the future.

Best regards
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IELTS letter motivation letter for erasmus internship

Letter
  American English
15 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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