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You are travelling and need someone to do you a favour while you are gone.

You are travelling and need someone to do you a favour while you are gone. NW38d
Dear Noura, I am writing this to inform you that I am planning to travel a few days to attend a meeting in Jeddah. This meeting means a lot to me and it is a career changer. However, you know that I have adopt a kitten recently and it needs a special care, and since you have a cat I was wondering of can take of Cally while I am gone. Yes, her name is Cally and she is so nice and quite. Also, I would not stay that long, only three days. I decided to ask you rather than others because I can trust you with pets since you have one. Let me know what do you think, I am waiting for your response. Best regards, Sara Alsudais.
Dear
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Noura
, I am writing this to inform you that I am planning to travel a few days to attend a meeting in
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Jeddah
. This meeting means a lot to me and it is a career changer.
However
, you know that I have adopt a kitten recently and it needs a special care, and since you have a cat I was wondering of can take of
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Cally
while I
am gone
. Yes, her name is
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Cally and
she is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
nice and
Did you mean "quiet"? 'quiet' means 'silent', 'quite' mean 'very' or 'to a moderate extent'
quite
.
Also
, I would not stay that long,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
three days. I decided to ask you
rather
than others
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I can trust you with pets since you have one.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know what do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
, I am waiting for your response.

Best regards, Sara
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Alsudais
.
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IELTS letter You are travelling and need someone to do you a favour while you are gone.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
129 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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