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Personal recommendation letter for the applying Global UGRAD

Personal recommendation letter for the applying Global UGRAD g8WVL
Dear Sir/Madam, I am a dedicated promoter and an emerging young leader of South Asia-Afghanistan. Holding two degrees in engineering and horticulture, I devoted more than 8 years of my life in serving at humanitarian affairs in key positions of numerous national and international organizations. I have represented my country in UAE, Kazakhstan, India, Pakistan, Uzbekistan, and in spite of my job, I always try to create platforms for the advancement and shaping of young generations. In 2018, a group of young leaders in Uzbekistan organized an International MUN Conference, where I was a part of the Afghanistan delegation. Oydinoy Khusanova was a delegate in the General Assembly. During Coffee break, we all got a chance to interact with each other. I was standing in a queue to get cookies when this girl in a classic outfit with an Uzbek national headwear bumped into me. She was so connected with her friend she was talking to, that she said sorry immediately, and went on her discussion on the Conference topic. I was amazed by her focus and decided to meet her in the next break. Fortunately, she turned out to be a great sociable person, and told me about herself. I was very proud of her when in this conference, she got the “Best Delegate” Award. We shared our contacts and kept in touch ever since. I have known Oydinoy for almost 2 years now, and I am always inspired by everything she does. Uzbekistan charmed me right after my first visit. Right after the MUN, I gathered a team of most active young leaders in Uzbekistan and we started working on “Imperial International MUN”, where Oydinoy Khusanova was appointed the job of an SMM. She possessed great skills during her work in the organizing committee. In times of unexpected crisis, she easily handled the team and did the job of a copywriter and a content manager as well. I have worked with thousands of young people in different countries, but have never seen a 19 year old girl as active and dedicated as Oydinoy is. I have seen that most students feel demotivated in their studies and eventually put themselves in stress. She always inspires me by saying: “If you are busy with something useful all the time, there will be no time to get bored”. There are so many things which set her aside from others, but the most important one is her continuous cycle of learning. She never stops following her dreams and makes “LLL” (life-long learning) a concept of her life. Oydinoy has become more than just a friend to me. Sometimes, she is my sister, my mentor, my advisor, and even my teacher! We keep each other updated on a daily basis and I am an alive evidence of all the work she has been doing in her community to empower women and sustain quality education. In 2019, UN Women and partners around the world marked 16 days of activism to end gender-based violence under the theme of “Orange the world- #HearMeToo”. Oydinoy was most probably the only one amongst my Uzbek friends who contributed to this movement, and continuously organized seminars for around 300 girls in different places of her region. She gave information on the topic “Women in STEM” and encouraged them to apply to international contests funded by organizations. She herself became the most active participant of "Technovation for Ferghana Valley" program and won a brand new phone, which is helping her in getting access to better information even faster than before. Although she had many options abroad, she wanted to grow her society and contribute to their development, which is why she chose to study at the uzbekistan State World Languages University. She is committed to serving her community, and it can be seen how selflessy she works in order to be=ring change. I believe she has so much potential and I promise she can become a part of your family quickly. If selected, Oydinoy will definitely contribute to the program. She is a very smart girl and I believe that other scholars will love her. She is very hard working and open to learning new things in life. Never afraid of asking questions is what builds her stronger. In my opinion, she is the best candidate for the Global Undergraduate Exchange Program. I will be happy to discuss any matter about Oydinoy in private, if needed. Sincerely yours, Noman Qauymi President, Imperial International MUN +93700706001 Nomanqauymi. icc@gmail. com 10th March, 2021
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a dedicated promoter and an emerging
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young
leader of South Asia-Afghanistan. Holding two degrees in engineering and horticulture, I devoted more than 8 years of my life in serving at humanitarian affairs in key positions of numerous national and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
organizations. I have represented my country
A determiner is probably missing here: "in the UAE".
in UAE
, Kazakhstan, India, Pakistan, Uzbekistan, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
in spite of
my job, I always try to create platforms for the advancement and shaping of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
young
generations.

In 2018, a group of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
young
leaders in Uzbekistan organized an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
International
MUN Conference, where I was a part of the Afghanistan delegation.
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Oydinoy
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Khusanova
was a delegate in the General Assembly. During Coffee break, we all
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
a chance to interact with each
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other
. I was standing in a queue to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
cookies when this
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girl
in a classic outfit with an Uzbek national headwear bumped into me. She was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
connected with her friend she was talking to, that she said sorry immediately, and went on her discussion on the Conference topic. I
was amazed
by her focus and decided to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
her in the
next
break.
Fortunately
, she turned out to be a great sociable person, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me about herself. I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
proud of her when in this conference, she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
the “Best Delegate” Award. We shared our contacts and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
in touch ever since.

I have known
Possible spelling mistake found.
Oydinoy
for almost 2 years
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, and I am always inspired by everything she does. Uzbekistan charmed me right after my
first
visit. Right after the MUN, I gathered a team of most active
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
young
leaders in
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Uzbekistan and
we
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started
working on “Imperial
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International
MUN”, where
Possible spelling mistake found.
Oydinoy
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Khusanova
was appointed
the job of an SMM. She possessed great
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
during her work in the organizing committee. In times of unexpected crisis, she
easily
handled the team and did the job of a copywriter and a content manager
as well
. I have worked with thousands of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
young
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in
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different
countries,
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but
have never
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seen
a 19 year
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old
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girl
as active and dedicated as
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Oydinoy
is. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
that most students feel demotivated in their studies and
eventually
put themselves in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
. She always inspires me by saying: “If you are busy with something useful all the time, there will be no time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
bored”. There are
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so
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many
things which set her aside from others,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the most
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important
one is her continuous cycle of learning. She never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stops
following her dreams and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
“
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LLL
” (life-long learning) a concept of her life.

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Oydinoy
has become more than
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just
a friend to me.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Sometimes
, she is my sister, my mentor, my advisor, and even my teacher! We
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
updated on a daily
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
basis and
I am an alive evidence of all the work she has been doing in her community to empower women and sustain quality education. In 2019, UN Women and partners around the world marked 16 days of activism to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
gender-based violence under the theme of “Orange the world- #
Possible spelling mistake found.
HearMeToo
”.
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Oydinoy
was most
probably
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one amongst my Uzbek friends who contributed to this movement, and
continuously
organized seminars for around 300
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
girls
in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
places of her region. She gave information on the topic “Women in STEM” and encouraged them to apply to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
international
contests funded by organizations. She herself became the most active participant of
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
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Technovation
for
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Ferghana
Valley
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
program and won a
'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".
brand new
phone, which is helping her in getting access to better information even faster than
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before
.

Although she had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
options abroad, she wanted to grow her society and contribute to their development, which is why she chose to study at the
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uzbekistan
State World Languages University. She
is committed
to serving her community, and it can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
how
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selflessy
she works in order to be=ring
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change
. I believe she has
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so
much potential and I promise she can become a part of your family
quickly
.

If selected,
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Oydinoy
will definitely contribute to the program. She is a
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very
smart
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girl
and I believe that
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other
scholars will
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love
her. She is
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very
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
hard working
and open to learning new things in life. Never afraid of asking questions is what builds her stronger. In my opinion, she is the best candidate for the Global Undergraduate Exchange Program.

I will be happy to discuss any matter about
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Oydinoy
in private, if needed.

Sincerely
yours,

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Noman
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Qauymi


President, Imperial
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International
MUN

+93700706001

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Nomanqauymi
.
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icc@gmail
.
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com


10th
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "March 2021".
March, 2021
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IELTS letter Personal recommendation letter for the applying Global UGRAD

Letter
  American English
10 paragraphs
750 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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