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motivation letter for erasmus

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I'm 20 years old. I live in Istanbul. I am studying physiotherapy and rehabilitation at Istanbul Kent University. I'm in my third year of college. I'm writing to apply as an Erasmus volunteer intern physiotherapist at your institution. I am interested in the field of Orthopedics and according to my research, more Orthopedic diseases come to your clinic. And so I think I have a lot to learn from you. In addition to the theoretical knowledge I have seen in Turkey, I want to improve myself with the practical knowledge in Poland. I believe that the perspective and vision of physicians and physiotherapists in Poland will have a significant impact on my career. I want to be useful to my patients with the important information I have learned from you. I think that it will affect my career life in a good way during the Master's period. I am eager to learn and ready to adapt myself to the new working situation. I couldn't do an internship before because it was the pandemic period, but I really wanted to do an internship. I am a member of the physiotherapy and rehabilitation club at my school. I play court tennis as a hobby and I go to fitness. I have an average of 3. 43 from the 4-point system. I have pre-intermediate level English and have already started learning your language. I chose Poland for Erasmus. Because I was very curious about Poland. It is very valuable in my country that I would be doing an internship in Poland. That's why I would like to do an internship in your clinic. I wish to be a part of your institution as it will lead me in the field where I want to work in the future. Best regards

I'm 20 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in Istanbul. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am studying physiotherapy and rehabilitation at Istanbul Kent University. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm in my third year of college. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm writing to apply as an Erasmus volunteer intern physiotherapist at your institution.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am interested
 in the field of Orthopedics and according to my research, more Orthopedic diseases This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to your clinic. And This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I have a lot to learn from you.

In addition
 to the theoretical knowledge I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in Turkey, I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 myself with the practical knowledge in Poland.

I believe that the perspective and vision of physicians and physiotherapists in Poland will have a significant impact on my career.

I want to be useful to my patients with the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 information I have learned from you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that it will affect my career life in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 way during the Master's period.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am eager to learn and ready to adapt myself to the new working situation.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 couldn't do an internship This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it was the pandemic period, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I really
 wanted to do an internship.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am a member of the physiotherapy and rehabilitation club at my school.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 play court tennis as a hobby and I go to fitness.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 have an average of 3. 43 from the 4-point system. I have Possible spelling mistake found.
pre-intermediate
 level English and have already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 learning your language.

I chose Poland for Erasmus. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 curious about Poland. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 valuable in my country that I would be doing an internship in Poland. That's why I would like to do an internship in your clinic.

I wish to be a part of your institution as it will lead me in the field where I want to work in the future.

Best regards