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You stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a conference in Australia, you left a briefcase with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend.

You stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a conference in Australia, you left a briefcase with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. PXkng
Dear sir, I hope you are in the pink of your health. I'm writing this letter to inform that I had great time with you when I visited a conference in Australia. I stayed at your home and thank you for your support. I visited your house during my conference and I really thankful to you for your kind help towards me. I would inform you that when I leaved your house I forget my suitcase in my room. There are some important document in the suitcase and I had my house key in right side of the bag. The suitcase is black and leather bag. It has three outside zip and one water bottal pocket also available. This bag is really crucial for me because it's gift of my sister on my last birthday and the most pricious is documents such as driving leicence, office I-card and so on. I would be appreciate If you could send me my suitcase by the post. I will send the address of the post and other important detail of this process. I would be thankful If you could help me. I look forward for you early reply. Best Regards, Namrata Sonani.
Dear sir,

I hope you are in the pink of your health. I'm writing this letter to inform that I had great time with you when I visited a conference in Australia.
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I
stayed at your home and thank you for your support.

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I
visited your
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house
during my conference and
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I
really
thankful to you for your kind
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help
towards me.
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I
would inform you that when I leaved your
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house
I forget my
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suitcase
in my room. There are
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some
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important
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document
in the
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suitcase
and I had my
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house
key in right side of the bag. The
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suitcase
is black and leather bag. It has three outside
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zip
and one water
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bottal
pocket
also
available. This bag is
really
crucial for me
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because
it's gift of my sister on my last birthday and the most
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pricious
is documents such as driving
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leicence
, office I-card and
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so
on.

I would be
Consider using the past participle "appreciated"?
appreciate
If you could
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send
me my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
suitcase
by the post. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
the address of the post and other
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
detail of this process.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would be thankful If you could
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help
me.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward for you early reply.

Best Regards,
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Namrata
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Sonani
.
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IELTS letter You stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a conference in Australia, you left a briefcase with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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