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Write a letter to company for job vacancy which is posted in newspaper?

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Dear Manager I am writing this letter to apply for the vacancy of customer service officer in your company which I saw in yesterday newspaper. Myself urvashi Panchal and I am 27 year old. I am living in flat bush area which is near to your company. I completed my bachelor degree in mathematics from vnsgu, Surat also the master degree from the same university. Moreover, I have 4 years experience as sales assistant in nz post. Currently I am working as customer service officer in kiwi bank. I am very friendly and family oriented with customer also I know how to deal with people in difficult situation. In an addition, I also got award from my recent job for best sales representative. I have all necessary skills which match to your job vacancy criteria. I would be able for this job because I have ability to handle customer which is main part of your criteria. I would appreciate if I got chance to work with your company. I look forward to hiring from you soon. Yours sincerely, Urvashi Panchal
Dear Manager

I am writing this letter to apply for the vacancy of
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service officer in your
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company
which I
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Myself
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urvashi
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Panchal
and I am 27 year
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. I am living in flat bush area which is near to your
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. I completed my bachelor degree in mathematics from
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vnsgu
, Surat
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the master degree from the same university.
Moreover
, I have 4 years experience as sales assistant in
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nz
post.
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Currently
I am working as
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service officer in kiwi bank.

I am
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very
friendly and family oriented with
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customer
also
I know how to deal with
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people
in difficult situation. In an addition, I
also
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got
award from my recent job for best sales representative. I have all necessary
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skills
which match to your job vacancy criteria. I would be able for this job
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because
I have ability to handle
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customer
which is main part of your criteria.

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I
would appreciate if I
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got
chance to work with your
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company
.
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I
look forward to hiring from you
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Yours
sincerely
,

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IELTS letter Write a letter to company for job vacancy which is posted in newspaper?

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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