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An email: Watching a film together

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Hello, Alex. How are you doing? Thanks for inviting me to watch a film with you at your house. I think it's a great opportunity for us to meet together and have some fun. Actually, unlike the majority of ladies, I prefer action movies or thriller moments to romance. I think I will be ready every weekend. Today, I have a horror film to recommend for you. Train to Busan is a horror film about a weird infectious disease that turns people into zombies if they are bitten, forcing everyone to battle for survival. I'd want to propose this film not only for its excellent content, but also for the scene in which the father and husband sacrificed their lives to save their daughter, wife, and others. While viewing the movie, I'd want to eat popcorn or fried chicken, pizza, and drink Coca-Cola. I hope the two of us will enjoy viewing the film together, and that you will like the movie that I recommended. See you soon, Natty
Hello, Alex.

How are you doing? Thanks for inviting me to
watch
a film with you at your
house
. I
think
it's a great opportunity for us to
meet
together and have
some
fun. Actually, unlike the majority of ladies, I prefer action movies or thriller moments to romance. I
think
I will be ready every weekend.
Today
, I have a horror film to recommend for you. Train to
Busan
is a horror film about a weird infectious disease that turns
people
into zombies if they
are bitten
, forcing everyone to battle for survival. I'd want to propose this film not
only
for its excellent content,
but
also
for the scene in which the father and husband sacrificed their
lives
to save their daughter, wife,
and others
. While viewing the movie, I'd want to eat popcorn or fried chicken, pizza, and drink Coca-Cola. I hope the two of us will enjoy viewing the film together, and that you will like the movie that I recommended.

See
you
soon
,

Natty
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IELTS letter An email: Watching a film together

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  American English
4 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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