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Write a letter to cinema manager about a jacket you have left behind after a filmDescribe a jacketDescribe you were seated 3.explain what you want to be done

Write a letter to cinema manager about a jacket you have left behind after a filmDescribe a jacketDescribe you were seated 3. explain what you want to be done rk92L
Dear sir, I am writing this to inquire about my jacket which I forget in a cinema complex. It is a long leather jacket in a red and black color with detachable fur cap. It has waist belt which occupied the shape of a flower. It is from “GUESS” and it is wearable under any temperature. I bought it a few months ago and it still looks new. Moreover, it costs around $500. I visited landmark cinema to watch a new releasing movie Gardhari laal. After that, to watch this movie we went to theatre number 6 in a left-hand side and I was having my seat in a third row and the seat number was 5. I am requesting you to check the theatre number 6 and if you are able to find it then please send it back at my address as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Your Faithfully, Mandeep Kaur
Dear sir,

I am writing this to inquire about my jacket which I forget in a cinema complex.

It is a long leather jacket in a red and black color with detachable fur cap. It has waist belt which occupied the shape of a flower.
It
is from “GUESS” and it is wearable under any temperature. I
bought
it a few months ago and it
still
looks new.
Moreover
, it costs around $500.

I visited landmark cinema to
watch
a new releasing movie
Gardhari
laal
. After that, to
watch
this movie we went to
theatre
number 6 in a
left
-hand
side and
I was having my seat in a third row and the seat number was 5.

I am requesting you to
check
the
theatre
number 6 and if you are able to find it then
please
send
it back at my address as
soon
as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your
Faithfully
,

Mandeep
Kaur
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IELTS letter Write a letter to cinema manager about a jacket you have left behind after a filmDescribe a jacketDescribe you were seated 3. explain what you want to be done

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
157 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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