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Write a letter to an international magazine for incorrect information about your town. correct the information, why it's important to give right information, suggestions

Write a letter to an international magazine for incorrect information about your town. correct the information, why it's important to give right information, suggestions o1Qb3

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the false information published in your 'Wanderlust Magazines' about ancient temple of goddess Laxmi, situated in Chalisgaon. I would like to draw you attention to the page number 10 of January 2022 copy, there it has been mentioned that, this temple has been constructed from it's base to the top, but the fact is, roof has been carved first and then base has been developed, you can crosscheck for the authenticity with research papers available on Google Scholar. I felt very disappointed due to the fact that your magazine is number one among other travel subscribed literature. And it may mislead the traveler and one might take legal action against incorrect content. I would like to suggest you that, instead of relying on single source your company can have a team who can physically visit the site and can have reality check for you. I hope this matter will be taken care soon and such mistakes cannot be repeated. Yours faithfully, Serena

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to the false information published in your 'Wanderlust Magazines' about ancient temple of goddess Possible spelling mistake found.Lax mi
Laxmi
, situated in Possible spelling mistake found.
Chalisgaon
.

I would like to draw you attention to the page number 10 of January 2022 copy, there it has been mentioned
 that, this temple has been constructed
 from Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?its
it's
 base to the top, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the fact is, roof has been carved
first
 and then base has been developed
, you can crosscheck for the authenticity with research papers available on Google Scholar.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 felt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 disappointed due to the fact that your magazine is number one among other travel subscribed literature. And it may mislead the traveler and one might take legal action against incorrect content.

I would like to suggest you that, instead
 of relying on single source your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 can have a team who can physically
 visit the site and can have reality This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 for you.

I hope this matter will be taken
 care This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and such mistakes cannot be repeated
.

Yours faithfully
,

Serena