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You are going to apply for a job.Write a letter to the manager of the comany.

You are going to apply for a job. Write a letter to the manager of the comany. RW70G
Dear Sir, I am writing to the position of a weekend job as a tour guide as advertised in last week's Guardian newspaper on 20th of January. As outlined in my curriculum vitae, which I have enclosed, I grafuated from the University of Foreign Languages in 2014. After graduation I began to work as a foreign language teacher at a local school for three years. Currently, I am employed as a foreing language teacher at Language Learning Center. Furthermore, I have been studying history since the age of 15. In adfition to this, being sociable is my job requirement and I have already obtained it. I believe that I am a well-suit candidaye for the position you have outluned, as I have a lot of knowledge according to History and English. I enclose my curriculum vitae and photograph as requested. I hope, you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yourth faithfully.
Dear Sir, I am writing to the position of a weekend job as a tour guide as advertised in last week's Guardian newspaper on 20th of January. As outlined in my curriculum vitae, which I have enclosed, I
grafuated
from the University of Foreign
Languages
in 2014. After
graduation I
began to work as a foreign
language
teacher at a local school for three years.
Currently
, I
am employed
as a
foreing
language
teacher at
Language
Learning Center.
Furthermore
, I have been studying history since the age of 15. In
adfition
to this, being sociable is my job requirement and I have already obtained it. I believe that I am a well-suit
candidaye
for the position you have
outluned
, as I have
a lot of
knowledge according to History and English. I enclose my curriculum vitae and photograph as requested.
I
hope, you will consider my application and I look forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible.
Yourth
faithfully
.
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IELTS letter You are going to apply for a job. Write a letter to the manager of the comany.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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