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A pet belonging to a friend of yours recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter include : • Your condolences. • What kind of animal it was. • Something you think will raise your friend’s spirits.

A pet belonging to a friend of yours recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter include: • Your condolences. • What kind of animal it was. • Something you think will raise your friend’s spirits. Ymqld
Dear Rahul, Hope you are good. I am writing this letter to express my grief on the occasion of this incident which happened last Sunday and takes away our beloved cat "Billu". Although, he is still with us and his memories will never be apart. Recently, I was missing him desperately and I still remember the initial moments when we first found him on our college trip to Srinagar, he was too young and hungry though he attracted our attention. Although he was as normal as other cats and looked very dirty, we were thrilled to get him. He was extremely cute, active and always playful. We know that words are less when we describe his naughtiness and at the same time nothing can fulfil this casualty. However, we have to move on with our life in a positive manner and this would help his soul to rest in peace. Therefore please go ahead and try to be strong enough. I will try to visit you soon next week. Please take care of yourself and your family. Regards Imran Ahsan
Dear Rahul,

Hope you are
good
.

I am writing this letter to express my grief on the occasion of this incident which happened last Sunday and takes away our beloved cat
"
Billu
"
. Although, he is
still
with us and his memories will never be apart.

Recently, I was missing him
desperately
and I
still
remember the initial moments when we
first
found him on our college trip to Srinagar, he was too young and hungry though he attracted our attention. Although he was as normal as other cats and looked
very
dirty, we
were thrilled
to
get
him. He was
extremely
cute, active and always playful. We know that words are less when we
describe
his naughtiness and at the same time nothing can fulfil this casualty.
However
, we
have to
move
on with our life in a
positive
manner and this would
help
his soul to rest in peace.
Therefore
please
go ahead and try to be strong
enough
. I will try to visit you
soon
next
week.

Please
take care of yourself and your family.

Regards

Imran
Ahsan
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IELTS letter A pet belonging to a friend of yours recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter include: • Your condolences. • What kind of animal it was. • Something you think will raise your friend’s spirits.

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  American English
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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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