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Letter to an agent regarding shifting of you and arrangements for new house. Why you are shift, what is your requirements for house when you are relocate

Letter to an agent regarding shifting of you and arrangements for new house. Why you are shift, what is your requirements for house when you are relocate wmbeq

Dear Mr. Shah, I am writing this to you regarding shifting of me and my family to Surat next week; hence, I am asking for arrangement of suitable home for us. I have been working at ICICI Bank, Ahmedabad since last two years as an assistant manager. Last week I had been got promotion and I have to shift to Surat and join my new responsibilities. Therefore, we want accommodation which best suit to us with three bedroom with balcony, a large hall and a kitchen. One special prerequisite is that it has its garden and facility for parking of vehicles. Another note is it should have peaceful environment since, my parents are elderly and they cannot tolerate cozy surrounding. I mention my mobile number below, if you have any querrey, please feel free to connect me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Mr. Jones.

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please
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, Mr. Jones. 